This song is named 01 at the moment :P
(There'll be no thrill if I already said the name haha)
The song was originally about love.
The story was about a couple, the boy gave the girl a necklace to bid farewell. The reason why the boy said that he wanted to end their relationship it's because he feels like it's not their fate. Upon this, the song rolls in.
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Basically, the song will be the boy says what he really feels on the girl, and the gitl will also say what she really wanted to say on the boy on chorus part.
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But sadly, I don't have a boy, or even someone to collaborate with as of moment.
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I didn't managed to remember the lyrics at the first run when I composed this melody, so I tried to make one while I was on my brother's despedida party before his departure on the next day:
(English translation was very literal.)
| 01 | 01 |
CH:
Pinipilit ko paring abutin at pinipilit ko paring intindihin Dahil nais ko parin maibalik ang pagmamahal natin ngunit "Tama na, hindi ko na kayang ituloy ko pa Tama na, hindi ko na kayang ialala pa Tama na, hindi ko na kaya pang pilitin pa ang ating pagsasama." Nais ko pa rin na iparating na hinding hindi kita ipagpapalit Kahit kailan, kahit ano pa ang mangyari ngunit "Tama na, hindi ko na kayang intindihin pa Tama na, hindi ko na kayang masaktan pa Tama na, hindi ko na kaya pang pilitin pa ang ating pagmamahalan." |
CH:
I'm still trying to reach for it and I'm still trying to understand it Because I still wanted to back our love but "Stop it, I can't continue it anymore Stop it, I don't want to remember it anymore Stop it, I can't take it anymore to be with you forevermore" I still want to tell it to you that you will not ever replace by anyone Anytime, whatever happens but "Stop it, I can't understand it anymore Stop it, I don't want to suffer anymore Stop it, I can't take it anymore to force that I love you forevermore" |
This is the First Chorus part of the song!
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So I changed it and my progress upon making the lyrics:
(English translation was very literal.)
| 01 | 01 |
V1:
Pagkagising, wala na kong magawa kundi Isipin kung ano pa nga ba ang mangyayari Dahil naalala ko ang bukas Dahil naalala ko ang nakaraan Na kung saan sa tingin ko akoy nagbago na Na kung saan sa tingin ko akoy nagiba na __ R1: "Kahit ang mga matang pumipiring ay may tahak din hindi mo ba alam?" Kaya ako ay mayron paring pagasa na makuha ito, lahat hindi ba? Hindi na baling ako ay masasaktan hindi na baling ako ay mawawala Sa landas na aking gagawin kong muli na paulit ulit lang ang paratang sa buhay CH1: Pinipilit ko paring abutin at pinipilit ko paring intindihin Na ang tadhanay koy hindi mkkta parin kahit ano pa ang mangyari |
V1:
As I wake up, I can't do anything anymore but to Think of what should happen next Because I remember of the future Because I remember the past On where that I think I already changed On where I think that I'm already different -- (not yet finished) R1: "Even blind people have still ambitions in their lives, do you know?" That's why I know that I still have the chance to get it, right? Even though I'll be hurt on it even though I'll be lost on it On the fate that I'll make again from the promise that did on my whole life CH1: I'm still trying to reach it and I'm still trying to understand it That my destiny will not still be found whatever I did |
The whole song was really rough! I did this one while I had fever, and I didn't managed to continue and finish the song because I still have fever until now! Well, i'm pathetic right now xD
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-kuruchI~
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